Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Dear Twilight Sparkle,

I would be more than happy to visit Ponyville and discuss my recent changes to the night in more detail. Please reply with the most convenient evening for you to host, and please keep this as just a simple social call! Also, you may want to invite Sweetie Belle. I believe she may enjoy our conversation.

Sincerely yours,

Two Months Earlier...

Princess Luna's horn glowed as she snapped the copy of "A History of Equestria: XXIV" closed. She tossed it onto an ornately engraved table with a thump, grimacing as she eyed the stack of sibling volumes she had yet to crack open. The alicorn's gaze again wandered to the door outside, to her personal balcony, and this time she gave in and stepped out of her quarters and into the fresh air.

Canterlot spread out before her, whites and golds, but her eyes were drawn to the stylized Sun decorating the tip of a nearby tower. From there she looked out to the real Sun, just preparing to set, and she let out a slow sigh. I should be raising the Moon by now, she thought to herself, closing her eyes. I should be doing a lot of things...

"When I had those books delivered to your room I didn't mean for you to read them all in one sitting, dear sister," a voice chimed from nearby, Luna jerking to look. "May I join you?" Princess Celestia was hovering in the air nearby with slow flaps of her massive wings. Her off-white coat and gold adornments matched all too well with the city below.

"Yes, of course," Luna replied, forcing a small smile to her face. She knew a large one wouldn't be very convincing.

Celestia landed with enviable grace, hardly a clop to be heard as she drew nearer. "It has been days since I last saw you, Luna. I hope you didn't mistake those books for an assignment?" Celestia leaned in to nuzzle Luna's cheek with the lightest touch, but even that made Luna wince. It was small, but it was there.

"No, it's just that I thought I would be more helpful if I knew more about what I missed." Luna turned away to look back out over Canterlot, and past it to Ponyville, the Everfree Forest, and beyond. "If I'm going to have equal responsibility in caring for your subjects then I need to know a lot."

"Our subjects, dear."

"Right. Sorry." Luna turned to look up at Celestia, brow furrowed. "It's not that I'm trying to shirk responsibility!"

"I know," Celestia said. "When your full magical powers and connection to the Moon return then we will know it is time for you to return to your role at my side."

"I..." Luna knew that her sister worked all day long, answering courtiers and reviewing reports from all corners of Equestria, meeting with diplomats, deciding the fates of thousands and thousands of ponies... And then spent most of the night on it, too! Sometimes it seemed like the closest thing Celestia had to a break was reading Twilight's reports from Ponyville. "I'm sorry." It was all she could say without breaking into tears.

"So am I, Luna," Celestia replied, again nuzzling Luna and again ignoring the cringe it inspired. "If you ever want to talk about anything, you know that I'm here for you, right?"

"I told you before, I don't remember any of it. The time of my exile, or being Nightmare Moon... It's all hazy, like it wasn't really me. Like..."

"Like it was all just a nightmare?"

Luna sighed and turned to look away again. The only thing she could remember clearly is that she loved her sister more than anyone and she wanted to make her proud.

"You know I forgive you, dearest," Celestia said. "Most Equestrians will never know what happened, and those that do have also forgiven you."

"I know..." Luna replied in a dull monotone. But how can they forgive somepony so easily for almost destroying all of Equestria? How can you?

"There was one more thing I wanted to make sure you know, Luna." Celestia's voice was always so soothing, always giving off an aura that let you know she was there for you. Almost always. For just a moment it changed in tone, turning rougher. Luna couldn't help but look back at her sister once more.

"If I had known that the Elements of Harmony would banish you to the surface of the Moon I never would have used them. I would have found some other way." Celestia had tears in her eyes, which stared deep into Luna's.

Luna was angry at herself for becoming Nightmare Moon, was guilty that she had scared so many ponies, was sad that she couldn't yet help her sister with the tiring tasks of ruling and raising the Moon and Sun every day... But this? It was the worst.

Please, sister, please don't cry!

"Please! It's, it's okay, really," Luna rushed out, her throat sore with held back tears of her own.

"It's very important to me for you to understand that." Celestia had already blinked away her tears and put a smile back on her face, her voice starting to return to normal.

"Yes, okay, I'll... keep it in mind. I promise." Luna forced a smile again and nodded, and Celestia's own smile grew larger.

"Thank you. And please don't push yourself too hard. I am certain everything will come back to you in time."

I hope so... "Me too."

Celestia leaned down and angled her head to press a gentle kiss to Luna's forehead, just below the horn, then made eye contact. The touch turned Luna's stomach, but she resisted the urge to pull away. "I know this is a hard time for you, Luna. I am here for you. When you're ready."

Luna turned away and nodded. "I know." You have the weight of the whole world on your shoulders, and you already worry about me constantly... And for some reason you think you have something to be sorry about when it's all my fault. How can I tell you it feels like here's a big hole in my soul when you'll just blame yourself?

Luna lifted a hoof and pointed at the sunset, its intermingled pastels totally lost on her. "It's almost time."

"Yes. It's all right, I'm glad to continue raising the Moon until you are ready. It is quite beautiful."

Luna just nodded again, staring at the horizon. Looking at the setting Sun was much easier than looking directly at her sister.

Celestia flapped her wings, lifting several feet off the balcony's floor. "And please, reconsider my offer to attend the symphony together? I am certain you would enjoy it. I will have a record player delivered to your room tomorrow. Please give it a try, for me."

"I will. Goodnight, sister."

"Goodnight, Luna!"

And then Luna was alone again. Her gaze landed once more on the faux-Sun adorning the tip of the nearest tower. She closed her eyes, but all she could see was her sister's face, with those big pink eyes filled with tears. She bit her lower lip to silence a sob and spun, rushing into her bedroom and slamming the door shut behind her.

Hours alone had done nothing to raise Luna's spirits. When she finally lifted her head from the tear-drenched pillow the mare discovered it was well into night. Seeing the stars through the window struck her hard and before she knew it Luna had burst out onto her balcony and taken flight.

Canterlot passed by in just a few beats of her wings. Soon Luna was shooting out over a sea of green that was the Whitetail Wood, her hooves skirting past some of the treetops. She instinctively angled toward a small circular clearing surrounded by dense tree cover where she could find some privacy. Throughout the flight her mind was blank, just concentrating on flying fast and being anywhere, anywhere at all, except Canterlot.

As soon as Luna landed she looked up and let out a soft gasp. There it was: the Moon. Her Moon, full and lighting up the sky with its pale glow. She hadn't moved the Moon in over a thousand years but she still felt possessive, even protective, of that great celestial body. She held no malice toward it being her prison, just a familiar sense of pride and adoration.

How long has it been since I spent some time with you? A week? I'm sorry.

Luna dropped to her haunches and looked around herself. She had found a perfect little glade, with short grass and several bunches of knee-high flowers in a smattering of colors. The plants stirred in a light night breeze that made Luna shiver pleasantly and fidget her wings. A deep breath pulled in the scent of sap and moist earth, and the aroma of the nearby flowers was almost good enough for Luna to taste. All of this was highlighted by the twinkling of the stars and the glow of her Moon, casting everything in just the right tone of light.

It was the best place she could imagine to dedicate some time to the Moon, but Luna sighed as she looked back up into the sky. "What's wrong?" she asked her Moon with a fragile whisper, "What's missing? It feels like you're so very far away..." Moisture welled in Luna's eyes, threatening to form into droplets, as she lifted a hoof to the sky.

The moonlight warmed the skin under her coat in a way that only the princess of the night could feel, but it wasn't enough. Her link with the Moon was lacking a depth that she could just barely remember. There was still an ephemeral cord binding them together, a bond that gave her emotional and magical strength, but the weakened connection was bittersweet.

A nearby rustling in the woods alerted her to movement, and the mare turned her head to see a curious raccoon peer at her through some undergrowth before continuing on its way. The soft hoot of an owl in the opposite direction caused Luna's ears to swivel in that direction. She furrowed her brow. "Hmm..."

Something... Something's not right.

There was a tickle of recollection, a fragment of the memory of sitting in the grass on a perfect night like this and listening. Luna couldn't remember what it was, but something had made her head bob and her horn sway side to side.

She closed her eyes again and concentrated, ears perked. A gust of wind made the grass and leaves rustle. A woodpecker in the distance provided a percussive beat. The drone of a mosquito flying by her ear, the voice of that owl hooting again, the patter of little paws, a cricket playing its song...

As each sound reached Luna's ears a new image filled her mind. She could see the woodpecker hammering a tree, set on a backdrop the color of the moonlit sky. Then the owl hooting on its branch, leaves rubbing against each other in the wind, the cricket on a blade of grass drawing one wing across the other... Each image appeared with the matching noise, then disappeared as it passed. But... it was wrong. It wasn't bad, but it was... Chaos. Uncontrolled. Just not right.

But what's missing...

Then, by random chance, the sounds of the woodpecker, owl, and cricket blended together in the night air, accompanied by the mental image of all three playing together, side by side, the notes intermingling into a chord. Luna leapt to her hooves. "That's it!" she cried, a nearby bird squawking indignantly at her outburst. She didn't notice, wings out, a smile splitting her face.

The music! The music of the night! I remember now! Every noise, every voice, they're all instruments in the ensemble!

Luna looked left and right, then back up at the Moon. "I'll be back tomorrow! I have work to do!" The mare lifted off and shot back toward Canterlot. I'll bring back the music and improve the night, just like I used to! I'll get my powers back and help take care of the night and the day!

"Just leave the tray there! I'll get it later!" Luna called to the bedroom door without turning, the knocking not enough to pull her attention away from the work at hoof. The door swung open to the hum of unicorn magic, but it wasn't a castle porter who entered the room.

"Sister, are you all right?" Celestia asked, stepping over the untouched food the last attendant had left for Luna. "I was informed you haven't eaten in two days."

"Uh huh. Just one sec, sis," Luna replied without sparing a glance. She swung her head side to side, eyes closed, lifting her glowing horn at either end of the swing, humming a melody. She nodded and used her magic to take down some musical notation with a quill and parchment before her.

The soft clip-clop of Celestia's approach stopped mid-step. "Luna, are you... Are you composing?"

The darker alicorn turned to face her sister with a shy little smile. "Yeah?"

Celestia rushed across the room and tucked her chin over her sister's neck in an equine hug. "That's wonderful!" Luna tensed by reflex, but was grateful to find that the contact was more comforting than not.

That is, until Celestia took a step back and looked down at Luna, speaking. The older sister had small, happy tears in the corners of her eyes, but Luna's stomach lurched as the sight reminded her of Celestia's tears the last time they spoke.

I'm so, so sorry...


Luna shook her head quickly. "I'm sorry, um, I didn't... What?"

"I asked, how much do you remember of the past?" Concern spread on Celestia's face. Luna turned away and looked down so she wouldn't have to see it.

"Not much, not yet. Music theory and stuff. Notation. That kind of thing."

"I'm not surprised that's the first thing that came back. Do you remember your music of the night?"

Luna nodded and looked over at the parchment spread over a table. "That's what I'm working on right here."

"I wasn't able to properly keep that going without you, Luna. You were always the expert on music and sound. That's why I kept trying to drag you to an orchestra or choir with me. I had hoped it would at least make you smile."

"Heh, yeah. I'm sorry, I probably should have gone with you." I really, really should have...

"It's all right, there's always next time. For now I'm just glad to see you doing what you love again. And, about the meals?"

Luna turned back to her sister and waved a hoof at the air dismissively. "I've been using magic instead. I hate wasting everypony's time, though, so... could you ask them to stop bringing me food?"

Celestia smiled. "They'll do that for you if you ask, you know. You are a princess."

Luna rubbed a hoof at the back of her head and chuckled weakly. "Yeah, I guess you're right."

"Just make sure to eat a few healthy meals a week, all right? Oh, but I'm being terribly impolite to our guest!" Celestia turned to the suite's door.

"Guest?" Luna asked, taking half a step back.

"Ha, guest!" a voice cracked from just out of sight. "Don't worry about me, Celestia." The owner of the voice stepped into view, an elderly unicorn mare with a gray coat and a curly golden mane. "I was eavesdropping the whole time anyway."

"Luna, this is Aura, our former Chief of Support Staff. Everypony from nursemaids to cooks to cleaning crews took orders from Aura for decades."

Aura stepped into the room, where Luna could see the two crossed purple knitting needles and ball of sky blue yarn that made up her cutie mark. "They would still be taking my orders if you hadn't forced me into retirement, you tyrant."

Luna gaped as Aura said those words with a straight face, then more as Celestia laughed.

"Aura was on leave for 6 months to care for a newborn family member in Trottingham and I used a little known rule--"

"Little known because you wrote it in!" Aura accused.

"--that any support staff off duty for at least one season may be retired at the discretion of a princess. Retirement with full pay and benefits, I decided."

Aura snorted. "Thank goodness for small favors."

"Now I've re-hired her as an advisor, an expert in domestic matters. She makes her own hours and it doesn't breach her retirement contract. She sends the extra money to Trottingham to cover the filly expenses."

"At least you put Silver Shine in charge of this loony bin. She has some sense in her head."

Luna looked between the two again, then shook her head. "I've never heard anypony talk to you like that before!"

Aura leaned toward Luna and asked, "What, do you want me to call you Princess Luna and grovel at your hooves every minute of every day? Or night?" She waved a hoof around in the air. "Whichever?"

"Um. No?"

"I didn't think so." Aura stepped closer and offered the still-raised hoof. "Pleased to meet you, Luna! I think we're going to get along swimmingly." Luna took the hoof and Aura shook it with surprising strength.

"You can trust Aura with anything, sister. She has been my friend and confidante for generations." Celestia smiled at Aura.

"Pfft, generations." Aura leaned in closer to Luna and stage-whispered, loud enough so Celestia would certainly hear. "Your sister is exceptional at making an old mare feel young again."

Celestia chuckled and shook her head. "I'll leave you two alone to get acquainted. I have a few minor duties to attend to." The large alicorn leaned forward to nuzzle Luna's cheek, who was still staring at Aura and barely noticed the contact. "Take care, dearest."

"Uh, yes, you too, sister." Luna watched Celestia close the door behind herself with a soft click, then turned to meet Aura's purple eyes.


"Oh, don't mind me!" Aura turned away and walked to one corner of the room, dropping to her haunches with a small wince. Her horn hummed and she summoned a basket of multicolored yarn into midair with a pop and a sizzle. "I'm just going to sit here in the corner and knit if you don't mind."

Luna decided that she did mind, but not not enough to say so. She also worried that anything short of a real princessly order wouldn't be enough to eject Aura if her mind was set on sticking around. The last thing she wanted was a scene.

"I guess..."

"Great. You look like you could use a blanket." And with that Aura's attention seemed to be devoted entirely to the effort of magically suspending the needles in midair and performing intricate knitting at a speed that left Luna staring. The princess eventually turned back to her music with a tiny sigh.

"That's Nocturne, isn't it?" Aura asked.

"Huh?" Luna jerked her head up and looked over her shoulder. After an hour of near-silence from her "guest" she had practically forgotten there was another pony in the room. The rhythmic tick-tick-tick of Aura's knitting needles had faded beneath her notice long ago.

"That song you keep humming little bits and pieces from. It's Dusk's Nocturne, right?" Aura continued knitting, eyes still focused on the needles as she looped together stitch after stitch.

"There isn't a name for it yet," Luna explained. "I'm still writing it."

"Oh? Okay, but it sounds like a variation on the theme from Nocturne."

Luna gritted her teeth and turned to fully face the unicorn invading her personal space. She mulled over what to say, seriously reconsidering ordering Aura away.

"It's beautiful, that's all."

Luna's jaw immediately unclenched. She opened and closed her mouth several times. Aura pretended not to notice.

"Really?" Luna finally asked, almost too quiet to be heard across the room.

"Anything that reminds me of Nocturne gets a special place in my heart. It's been my favorite song for..." Aura barked a short laugh. "For 'generations.' But it sounds like you're going to outdo it with that little ditty."

There was no hint of sarcasm in Aura's voice. Luna searched the unicorn's face for a smirk, or even a smile, but there was none to be found. Butterflies fluttered about Luna's stomach as those knitting needles kept on tick-tick-ticking away.

"I... I think I'd like to hear Dusk's Nocturne, then."

Aura pointed toward the record player that a retainer had delivered days ago; it had sat untouched while Luna composed. "Check to see if you have a copy."

Luna hovered the collection of records into the air and flipped through them until she found a Canterlot Philharmonic Orchestra album that included Dusk's Nocturne as the last track. "That's a good recording," Aura commented. "Go ahead, put it on."

As the record started Aura laid her knitting needles and yarn down atop the basket and closed her eyes.

The scratch-pop of the player's needle sliding off the record brought Luna back to reality. Her eyes fluttered as she opened them, touching a hoof to the dampness on her cheek. She'd been crying, but with a smile on her face. Luna could just barely recall something passing through her mind during the song, a memory of listening to music while leaning up against something warm, but it was gone again.

The alicorn glanced at Aura, who was looking at her and also smiling. It was the first time Luna had seen her with more than just a passing smirk, and she liked it.

"Beautiful, huh?" Aura asked.

"Yeah... And haunting," Luna replied, looking at the record player. Her horn hummed and Luna almost reset the needle to play it again, but instead she just nestled the arm of the player back into its resting place and turned it off.

"That's a good word for it," Aura commented with a nod. "Haunting."

"And powerful, and..." Luna's smile faltered. "It's very good," she stated, her voice souring as she walked back to look down at the sheet of her own music. "Very, very good."

"And that's a bad thing?" Aura asked.

Luna lifted her parchment into the air with magic. She "held" it so tightly that it rustled. "How can I improve something like that?" she asked, the pitch of her voice rising. "All I'd be doing is... ripping off something so... so perfect that it... it..."

"Do you know what a nocturne is?" Aura piped in.

"Huh?" The parchment in Luna's magical grip stopped fluttering. "I... It sounds familiar, but I don't remember..."

"It's a song inspired by the night. Out of respect, or love, or gratitude."

Luna's eyes danced from Aura, to the record player, then out the window to the late sunset. She could just barely see the first stars appearing in the sky.

Inspired by the night, Luna thought, biting her lower lip.

When she looked back at Aura the unicorn was reading the back of the album cover. "Listen to this. 'The Canterlot Philharmonic Orchestra concluded the concert with their annual performance of Dusk's Nocturne, a song that has touched hearts for a thousand years.'"

Luna blinked. "A thousand years?"

"You were always a composer, right?"

"I think so? It feels so right." Luna was pacing as she spoke, eyes on the floor. "I can't remember anything else, but all these things came back to me like harmony and dissonance and a whole lot more. And my sister..." Luna stopped walking, her voice softening. "She was so happy when she saw me writing music. Like... it was a step in the right direction." Like maybe I would get better soon...

"So the first thing that came back to you was this song, which just happens to be a thousand years old, back when you were composing your best stuff." Aura grinned. "I hate to break it to you, Luna, but I'm starting to think you wrote Dusk's Nocturne."

Luna's eyes widened. "Me?!"

Aura clopped one hoof to the floor and laughed. "It only makes sense! I never thought I'd get to meet my favorite composer!"

Luna shook her head, eyes flicking between the record player and her musical notes a half-dozen times. Could it be true? "But... I..."

The unicorn snorted. "Is it so hard to believe that you wrote a song that's been celebrated for a millennium?"

Luna shuffled her hooves and looked down at them. "Um. Yes?"

Aura laughed again in one short, raspy crow. "Celestia told me all about it. You're both artists; she paints and you compose. Did you know she still paints?" Luna pulled her head back up at that, ears perked. "She puts her art out there, under a fake name of course. Most ponies like it but critics look down their snouts at it. She considers that a 'sign of success,' the old loon." Aura's grin belied the fact that she agreed.

"But your music," Aura continued, "everypony loved your music. And just like your sister you never took credit for it."

Luna thought back to her mental state in the middle of Dusk's Nocturne moments earlier: her eyes closed and tears on her cheeks, smiling and swaying her horn side to side as if conducting the music herself. Everything that Aura was saying resonated with something deep inside the alicorn. I...

"I always wondered why no composer took credit for such an incredible..." Aura trailed off, pulling Luna's attention back to the unicorn. "That devious old goat!" Aura got caught up in a laughing fit that set her to coughing. Luna approached and raised a hoof but Aura waved her off, shaking her head and clearing her throat.

"No, no, I'm fine, dear, thank you! I just realized, your conniving sister knows that Nocturne's my favorite song. She didn't bring me here just for you, but as a favor to both of us."

A tiny smile was creeping back onto Luna's face. "Do you really, really think that maybe I..." She couldn't even get the words out.

Aura nodded. "I do. And I wasn't yanking your hoof when I said you're improving the song. I can't wait to hear a full orchestra perform it."

"I'm not..." Luna caught a glimpse of the Moon out a nearby window and inspiration struck. "I have work to do, but will you come back in two days? At the same time? I have something I want to show you." The dark mare's horn glowed and thrummed as she collected her quill, ink, parchment, and several books into a tidy bundle with her magic.

"I'll be here," Aura said with a nod.

Luna's eyes searched Aura's, flicking back and forth between them, before the princess leapt forward and threw her front legs around the unicorn in a tight hug. Aura chuckled and rubbed Luna's back with a hoof.

"Thank you," Luna said quietly before pulling away, tears in her eyes and smiling widely. "Thank you!"

She scooped up the bundle of supplies with her magic and bounded through the open balcony door. She beat her wings twice, then laughed and pulled into a tight double-loop over Canterlot that left her pointing straight up at the Moon. Her wings snapped repeatedly through the air as she gained altitude, gazing into her celestial friend's glow.

Luna's breath caught in her throat. The Moon seemed huge to her, as if she could reach out and touch it. She could feel more than the Moon's light, too: every contour and crater was mapped out in her mind, as if she was holding it in her hooves. What had truly caught her off guard was that Luna could hear the Moon again, a clear, ringing note as it strolled across the sky.

Luna raised a hoof upward and whispered one word. "Soon..."

And then she tucked into a steep dive, heading for her private glade and the first recital of the night's new song.

"Spying on your little sister?" Aura asked in a whisper, having caught Princess Celestia in the act. The larger mare had the door to Luna's quarters open just wide enough to fit her nose through, letting music spill out into the hallway. Celestia didn't respond to the jibe, just shifting over to make room for the unicorn to also sneak a peek. Aura tip-hoofed closer to fill the gap.

Luna stood at her table, facing away from the door. She was listening to a record of orchestral music, head swaying side to side and her blue tail swinging in counterpoint. The onlookers could just barely hear her humming along. Luna's collection of musical books had expanded significantly in the two days since Aura's last visit, several stacks taking up half the table's space, four of them open on the table with a number of bookmarks sticking out between pages.

Luna's horn gave off a purple glow as she held a quill aloft, and at one point she paused the record to whistle a short melody, glance at a book, nod to herself, and take several seconds of notes on the parchment before her. She whistled the tune again, then nodded several times and gave an excited little flap of her wings. "Perfect!" she decided as she reached out to the record player again with her magic. Her tail hadn't stopped swaying, and when the music came back on it was still marching along to the beat.

Celestia noiselessly withdrew from the doorway and took several steps down the hall, leaving Aura to close the door and join her. The older sister was smiling, even more widely than her usual serene look.

"Am I biased, or is my sister adorable?"

Aura snorted but nodded her head. "Yup, she's a cutie all right. Makes me wonder what you were like when you were little."

"A royal pain in the flank, I'm sure."

"So nothing's changed then."

Celestia chuckled quietly, a short, companionable silence falling between them until she glanced at Luna's door. The smile faded from her face.

Aura's voice softened. "Something has changed."

"Luna and I are sisters, but we were also the best of friends. We always relied on each other." Celestia lifted her head in thought, eyes focusing on a featureless spot of the wall. "I always had a more public face and made the easiest decisions, but it was a major change to rule without her input."

"And her support?" Aura asked.

Celestia nodded, looking back down at Aura. "Do you recall those times I came from meetings with a diplomat or business-pony and told you all about how unreasonable and rude they were?"

"You would describe them so calmly, and then sit there and smile while I shook my hoof and called them walking piles of manure behind their backs," Aura recounted. "I was filling in for Luna?"

The princess nodded. "Yes, though you use much more colorful language."

"It's a gift."

There was another pause, but this time Celestia ended it in a soft voice. "I banished her for a thousand years, Aura. Now she's finally home, but I still don't have her back." Celestia's eyes locked onto Luna's door again.

"It sounds like you blame yourself for all of this."

Celestia inclined her head hardly an inch, but it was an affirmative.

"Do you think she blames you?" Aura asked, angling her head toward Luna's door. Muffled music still piped into the hallway through the wood.

"I don't know." Celestia shook her head. "Maybe not, but when her memories come back she might."

Aura shook a hoof in Celestia's direction, drawing the princess's attention back. "I'll bet this whole leg that what you two need is to sit down together and have a brutally honest chat. You're ready for it, but she's not. So, here's what Dr. Aura prescribes.

"You," Aura punctuated by nudging Celestia in the chest, "need to go get some rest, and think things through. I've never seen you so caught up with something, and it's no wonder. You haven't felt like this in hundreds of years, right?"

Celestia nodded.

"There are ponies who bury guilt for a few weeks and it eats them alive. You've been burying this for a thousand years! I'm shocked you haven't burnt down half of Equestria yet!"

Celestia's smile started to return. "The thought hadn't even crossed my mind..."

Aura poked her ruler again. "No fires! Meanwhile, I'm going to work on your sister. I can't imagine how guilty she feels about all this. Plus she's re-learning what to do with her life, like a filly all over again. We have to give her some time."

Aura's voice lightened and she smiled up at Celestia. "I know it's been forever, but can you give an old mare a couple weeks to try to make things right?"

"Of course. Thank you, Aura." Celestia leaned forward and nuzzled the side of Aura's cheek.

Aura returned the touch and snorted. "Hay, what are friends for? Besides, you introduced me to my favorite composer, so I owe you one."

"So you figured that out, hmm?" Celestia asked with a casual air, her calm smile fully back in place.

"You tricky old ne'er-do-well." Aura shook her head and made a shoo-ing gesture toward the bedroom. "Luna's expecting me any time now. You scoot over there and say goodnight to your little sister."

Celestia looked at the door for a long moment before crossing the hall. She rapped on the door twice with her hoof and opened it just wide enough to slip her head inside. Luna was still swaying in place to the music, her back to the doorway, but she lowered the volume with a whisper of magical power.

"I'm on my way to bed soon, Luna, but I wanted to wish you a pleasant night."

"You too, Tia," Luna replied without turning away from the table, so completely absorbed in her work that she didn't fully realize who she was speaking to. "Sleep well!"

Celestia froze and stood watching her sister's horn rhythmically toss side to side, the volume of the record player turned back up. Eventually she withdrew and closed the door behind her.

"What?" Aura asked, prompted by the unreadable look on Celestia's face.

"Just like old times," was the reply, spoken almost too quietly to be heard, and then Celestia smiled with small tears in her eyes. "She called me Tia," she said, louder. "It's been far too long since I heard that nickname."

"I told you everything would be okay," Aura replied. "Now go bring the Moon out so Luna can show me her surprise."

"Just hold your horses," Aura wheezed as she pulled herself up an incline in the middle of the Whitetail Wood. She leaned against a tree at the peak, catching her breath with her eyes closed.

Luna stopped mid-canter and looked back over her shoulder, her face framed by branches criss-crossing the night sky. She flew back to Aura's side with a sheepish smile, sending some leaves fluttering with flaps of her wings.

"Um. Sorry." Luna landed and scuffled at the forest floor with a hoof. "I guess I'm a little bouncy tonight. But, we're really close!"

"Great. Wonderful." The tempo of Aura's panting steadily slowed.

"I'm sorry to drag you through the woods, Aura, but I haven't shown anypony else this place yet. It felt wrong to turn the glade into a landing strip." Maybe I was a little too selfish, Luna thought, biting her lower lip.

"Don't worry, I get it." Aura's hips creaked as she settled her weight evenly on her hooves again. "Plus the trip back will be easier, right?"

"Yes, but... Maybe I could go get the guards--"

Aura waved the thought away with a hoof. "C'mon, let's go," she insisted and started walking again, leaving Luna to follow. The alicorn watched Aura for a moment, then shook her head and caught up.

Moments later they broke through the last of the cover and stood under the glow of the Moon, its rhythmic thrum perking Luna's ears and bringing a smile back to her face. She stood at the edge of the glade and watched as Aura walked out into it with slow, measured steps, looking in all directions and then up. Luna's breath caught in her chest as she watched Aura stare into her Moon for a very long moment, the unicorn's coat silver in its light, mane rustling in the silent breeze.

I can feel it... She really likes the night...

Aura looked around herself one more time before turning to Luna with a smile. "You have good taste. But we already knew that."

The words coaxed a shaky chuckle out of Luna. She stepped into the glade and blinked a little dampness from her eyes. "I guess, but this isn't what I wanted to show you. It's going to take a minute to warm up, so please get comfortable."

Luna moved to the center of the glade and steeled herself, taking a deep breath. She hesitated, glancing over her shoulder at Aura. The unicorn had taken a seat in the grass and was watching her. When their eyes met Aura nodded and gave a "go on" motion with a hoof.

It's now or never...

Luna turned back to the woods and closed her eyes. Her horn lit up very slowly, starting at just a quiet drone but building up and up. The tone raised in pitch all the while, until it trilled like a songbird, Luna's horn a thin spear of dark purple light that pointed directly at the Moon. The alicorn had spread her hooves out past shoulder width as if bracing herself, wings spread wide.

The magic released all at once, Luna's horn dispersing a flat purple-black disk into the trees in all directions, parallel to the forest floor. Aura watched it sail overhead, the air faintly sizzling with power, nearby foliage taking on a lesser sympathetic glow as the wave passed.

The forest went completely quiet and still for several heartbeats, not a single animal chirping or leaf twitching. Luna stood unmoving, but she didn't have long to wait. She smiled as she felt her call being answered. Squirrels and birds, bees and snakes, even the trees, the clouds, and the wind itself all came to attention.


Luna's eyes flashed open, glowing from deep inside with the same light her Moon provided to Equestria every night. She hummed a long, crystal clear note and her horn sang out to form a perfect duet. Her tail began to sway to the beat provided by the Moon's rhythmic voice, the primary feathers of her wings twitching in unison.

Soon her horn was dancing side to side along with her tail, and then with a sharp upward swipe the first note of her song pierced the stillness of the night; the performance had begun.

Luna didn't release her magical focus until the last note faded from hearing. She furled her wings back into place and turned to look at her audience.

Aura was staring at her, moonlight reflecting from dampness at the crease of each eye.

Luna took half a step back, the image of her sister on the verge of tears flashing through Luna's mind again. "I... What's wrong?" she asked in a small voice. What did I do?

"That... that was..." the unicorn started, voice hoarse. She cleared her throat and asked, "What was that?" Aura looked out into the forest and then back at Luna. She shook her head. "There isn't anything in Equestria that sounds like that! I've heard all sorts of birds and critters used in music and probably every instrument known to ponykind. Where did those noises come from?"

"I... I'm sorry, I thought..." Luna squeezed her eyes shut tight, body starting to shake. She didn't like it... I can't even do this one thing right!

Aura's eyes widened in realization and she shook her head quickly. "No! Luna, that was the most incredible thing I've ever heard!"

Luna's eyes snapped back open to look into Aura's.

"Luna, it was... my goodness. I don't know! It was as if the forest was singing to me, all of it at once, but everything was all smooth and soft and... what's-the-word, ethereal!"

All the tension went out of Luna in a rush and she fell to her rump. She opened her mouth, but all that came out was, "... Oh."

"And that's before I even get into the composition itself! You took the two intertwined melodies of Dusk's Nocturne, combined them into one, then wound in another all new melody. They play off each other so beautifully!" Aura was waving her hooves around in front of her as she spoke, more animated than Luna had ever seen her.

She likes it. She... she loves it.

"Where did the music come from, Luna?"

"Huh?" Luna cleared her head with a quick little shake.

"The sounds, the instruments, whatever. What were they?"

"I... Well, everything you heard is out there, in the forest." Luna waved a hoof at the Whitetail Wood, which had resumed its natural murmur of night life and breezes. "I used the leaves, hollow trees, the wind, and magic to... to shape each sound before it got to you."

"That's a real gift, Luna. That's amazing." Aura shook her head slowly, smiling.

Luna blushed and looked down at the grass. "I didn't do all of it. I mean, I guess I laid the groundwork, but... you could say I taught the night what I wanted you to hear and just pointed it in the right direction. It did the rest."

Aura shook her head again, still smiling. "Wow."

"What?" Luna asked, lifting her head and tilting it a few degrees to the side.

"Just... All of this." Aura's hoof gestured to indicate the glade, the forest, the Moon, and Luna in one motion. "I'm honored. Thank you."

Luna looked back down at the grass for a moment, then met Aura's gaze and smiled. "I'm very glad you enjoyed it."

"Everypony is going to love it, Luna."

The princess shook her head. "Oh, no, I couldn't--"

Aura raised a hoof to stop her. "You don't have to take credit for it, but you're going to share this song. You'd be doing Equestria a disservice if you kept it to yourself."

Luna inhaled and parted her lips to speak but Aura raised just one eyebrow and the alicorn knew that she'd already lost the argument. "Okay, as long as it's anonymous."

Aura held up a hoof to her lips, ears perked as she looked off into the forest. "Am I hearing things?"

"What?" Luna asked. Maybe she noticed?

"I heard... just a little bit of music on the wind. Did you do that?"

Luna laughed and reared up, then bounced to her front hooves and kicked at the air with her hind legs, wings flapping once. "Yes! It worked!"

Aura just watched, smirking, and when Luna stopped she caught the look and blushed again, chuckling weakly at herself. "Um. That's the new music of the night."

"And what does that mean?" Aura insisted.

"Well, I can't keep everypony up all night with music, and I would hate to wake up early sleepers. Sooo, I kinda snuck little snippets of the song into the night. Just a handful of notes here and there, or maybe a little improvisational take-off from one of the melodies, things like that."

Aura didn't reply, keeping her ears perked. Then she caught it, a gust of wind carrying the hoot of an owl, a branch sliding along the bark of a tree, and the song of a cricket, but blended and smoothed and combined such that they were barely recognizable. It was only a few notes, but it made her shiver at the memory of her recent musical experience.

"I hope everypony likes the music of the night," Luna murmured, looking up at the Moon. "I want them all to enjoy the night, and this is the best thing I could come up with..."

Aura pursed her lips and mulled over her words before starting. "Luna?"

"Mmm?" Luna turned back to her friend.

"It's subtle, and beautiful, and everypony who knows what they're hearing will love it."

Luna smiled and started to speak, but Aura raised a hoof.

"But! Not everypony will know what they're hearing. Like I said, it's subtle. I have an ear for this sort of thing, plus I just heard the song. There are ponies who will never pick up on it, even if they listened for their whole lives."

Luna's face fell and she glanced out into the forest, in the direction of Ponyville and all its sleeping ponies. "... Oh." She's right. Of course she's right. What was I thinking?

Aura approached and turned Luna's head so that she was forced to meet the unicorn's eyes. "So here's what we're going to do." The tone of Aura's voice, plus the allure of a plan of action, pulled Luna's mind to attention.

"First, we're going to distribute sheet music of your song... What's it called?"

Luna shook her head. "I... haven't named it yet."

"First, you're going to name your song! Then we're going to spread it across Equestria. It'll take some time but eventually everypony will hear it. And then they'll start recognizing the music of the night, and talk about it, and make their friends stay up with them to hear it, too."

Luna looked back and forth between Aura's eyes. That... That could work. But-- "But then they'll know I wrote the song, won't they?"

Aura shrugged. "So you just say that the song inspired you. No big deal." Luna opened her mouth, but Aura continued before she could be interrupted. "And while that's going on you're going to keep improving the night, but not with music."

Luna blinked. "But--"

"No buts! Your sister can't hold a candle to you musically, but she still came up with bird song, right?"

"I guess that's true..."

"I'd say bird song is the best thing about the morning, and lots of ponies would agree with me. So I want you to think about what you can do to make evening better. Start small, something simple."

"But... not musical?" Luna asked, eyes wide.

Aura snorted as she caved under the pressure of that pleading gaze. "Okay, maybe a little musical. It's only fair, since Celestia made all the singing birds in those terribly gaudy colors."

Luna giggled, then shook her head a little. She took a deep breath and let it out with a sigh. "Thank you, Aura." I don't know where I'd be without you, Luna thought, smiling again.

"Hay, what are friends for?" Aura said with a chuckle to her voice.

Luna looked at the unicorn, trying to discern what she was laughing about, but Aura shook her head. "Oh, you just reminded me a little of Celestia. You two are definitely sisters."

Aura started out of the glade, but Luna just watched, not moving to follow. Sister...

She eventually caught up; the unicorn had picked a slow enough gait that it would be hard not to overtake her. "You don't want to talk about her yet?" Aura asked.

"I don't think so," Luna replied in a small voice.

"Okay, I can respect that, but I do have to say that she loves you, and misses you. She doesn't blame you for anything that happened, either."

"I..." Many thoughts tumbled through Luna's mind, particularly, Because she blames herself! It took her a few moments, but in the end Luna just nodded.

"You need to share your talent with more ponies," Aura decided suddenly.

Luna nearly tripped. "Huh?"

"There's a certain purple unicorn that you reminded me of earlier today. When she gets an idea in her head she can spend days nose-deep in books and not even notice. Twilight Sparkle loves magic more than anything, but I've seen her up at all hours of the night with a telescope, sketching constellations and taking notes."

"Really? I know some ponies use the stars for navigation, but--"

"Plus, she's Celestia's student. It'd be good for you two to share some friends."

"Oh." Luna glanced over at Aura and took a risk. "And you call my sister devious..."

Aura snorted, but it was reaction enough that Luna giggled under her breath.

As the two made their way back down the incline Luna started brainstorming on Aura's assignment. Something small and simple...

"All right, I think I'm ready," Luna said. She lowered a copy of Nocturnal Fauna of Equestria onto her table and turned to Aura, the gray mare sitting in her customary corner of the room.

"Oh?" The tick-tick-tick of Aura's knitting needles didn't slow.

"Yes, I think so. I was so very close last night and I just figured out what went wrong." Luna tidied up her workspace as she spoke, neatly stacking the rest of her books and rolling up a scroll. "Are you ready for another trip to Whitetail Woods?" she asked, smiling.

Aura never took her eyes off of her floating yarn, her horn quietly humming. "Why don't you show Celestia?"

Luna's face fell and she looked off to the side at nothing in particular. "She... She's so busy. I don't want to bother her." It's barely even an "improvement," anyway, Luna thought. It's not really worth her time...

Aura hmmed, but didn't speak for a few moments, the knitting needles continuing their work. "I'll let you weasel out of it this time, but you have to promise me you'll play her your new version of Nocturne someday. The way you played it for me."

But... Luna's mind whirled, reaching out for a reason, any reason, that she could say no. She was proud enough of her music that she couldn't say it's not worth Celestia's time, especially since part of her knew that her sister would really enjoy it.

But... Some aspect of her mind still resisted the idea. Thinking about how Celestia would be proud of her made Luna happy and uncomfortable at the same time. I don't deserve her being proud of me, went through her head and Luna closed her eyes tight. Another part of her, one that had only recently started to speak up, clamped down on the unpleasant thought and stifled it. She re-opened her eyes.

Only then did Luna notice Aura was looking at her with a small smile on her face, her knitting needles unmoving and silent.

"Well?" Aura asked in a lilting voice.

Luna sighed, then shook her head at the whole situation. She was surprised to find herself smiling back, even if it was just a little. "Okay. Someday."

Aura nodded. "Good." She went back to her knitting and let a few moments of silence pass before speaking again. "So, what about Twilight?"

"Huh?" Luna's head tilted. "You mean Twilight Sparkle? What about her?"

"Why don't you show her your project?"

Luna blinked, then shook her head slowly. "Aura, I don't even know her."


"So?" Luna started pacing. "So how would she react if I just... just showed up out of nowhere, knocked on her front door, and... and..." She trailed off; she couldn't even imagine the scenario!

Aura continued the train of thought. "... And then you say, 'Hello, Twilight Sparkle! I'm Princess Luna, and I'm here to show you some magic I just came up with to improve the night! You'd be the first pony to ever see it, plus I'll tell you all about how it works! Oh, and Celestia says hi!'" Aura paused in thought, tapping her chin, then smirked. "I think she might explode."

"The last time she saw me, I... I think I was trying to kill her." Shaky glimmers of memory, of the Elements of Harmony saving her from herself, bubbled up to the surface.

Aura shrugged. "Water under the bridge."

Luna just stared for a moment, then shook her head again. "Aura, I understand what you're trying to do, but I can't just--"

Aura cut her off with the stomp of a hoof and then shook it at Luna. "All this 'but' and 'can't' business isn't going to do you any good," she said firmly, curly golden tail giving a single flick.

Luna opened her mouth, but when she realized she was about to say, "But," again she closed it and sighed.

Aura unsummoned her basket of yarn with a pop and then walked to Luna's door, catching the alicorn's attention. "Soon you're going to be ruling Equestria with your sister and running the night. I can think of a big hoof-ful of reasons that you should get out there, show off your stuff, get feedback from real live ponies, and maybe even make some friends."

The door swung open with a gesture of Aura's horn, but she paused before leaving. "If it's not going to be Celestia or Twilight, then think about who'll like your change the most. See what they think. I'm going to go finish your blanket. I'll see you in a couple days."

Aura stepped through the door and closed it behind her, the gray mare leaving Luna standing in the middle of her bedroom with one hoof raised out.

"I hope she's not mad at me," Luna murmured, but she got the impression that if Aura was mad she would tear down brick walls and chew through steel. The image made her giggle quietly, but that just turned into a sigh. The princess stepped out onto her balcony, eyes low.

What am I going to do? Maybe an invisibility spell?

The warmth of the moonlight on Luna's coat sent a surprised shiver through her body. She looked up at the Moon, an unbidden smile coming to her face.

What do you think I should do? she asked, but the Moon's voice carried only that one tone, repeated over and over, that set the beat for the music of the night. You make a better metronome than conversationalist... But I forgive you.

Luna's gaze lowered, then flicked to something bright in the corner of her eye. It was Ponyville, lit up in the early night. It was too far away to make out any details with the naked eye, but something on a deeper level called out to Luna, in the same way she knew that Aura enjoyed the night. There was at least one little pony down in Ponyville who very much did not want to go to sleep.

Who will like my change the most? Luna repeated Aura's words in her head. A plan took shape all at once and the princess nodded to herself as she turned to leave. I'm going to need the right spell, though. Time for another late night library run.

She couldn't help but grin a little. You win, Aura, but I hope you're okay with a compromise!
Part 2 can be found here: [link]

Synopsis: Princess Luna's memories and connection to the Moon have been missing since her return to Canterlot, and every day she gets more and more guilty that she hasn't taken any responsibilities back from her overburdened sister. Surely something in Equestria can make her whole again, but who or what could it be? -- EquestriaDaily link: [link] (6 Stars! I exploded twice.)

I wrote Nocturne over the course of like... a month and finished it on June 23, 2011. It was hard, but I feel that the birth pains were worth it. There's no way I would have survived it without the great editing assistance and support of :iconkitsuneymg: for which I am eternally grateful.

This complete story is around 16,700 words and while it does have a strong odor of moon cheese it's impolite to discuss this in mixed company.
Add a Comment:
TakeWalker Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013

y u no post this on fimfic? :B
ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Two stories that are stuck in limbo.

The rest of the fanfics are uh....
You would be more than correct in assuming that the characters are probably self inserts in disguise.
It seems I lack the finesse and harmony required to write some decently, half baked story.
ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
... It has been a long time since I have seen a fanfic that has used the fanon version of Luna....
Oh how I weep for what we have lost.

True, we gained a Luna who is confident...... But ultimately she is more cold and distant...
The Luna of the olden times were the ones that I could empathize with....
Her new form on the other hand.... It just isn't the same....
Pray tell, do you think you could submit this to
You'll get FAR more exposure on there than on dA and
Here is the site and two stories to boot!
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Yeah, poor Luna. I'm with you: I don't DISLIKE our new canon Luna, but I definitely preferred our fanon version. C'est la vie... I hope you liked my rendition of her!

Also, thanks for the suggestion and you're right: I _would_ get a lot more exposure of this story on Fimfiction. I have a Fimfiction account actually, where I now post my stories instead of on here. Go take a look and maybe you'll find something you like: [link]
ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
... Actually, I am in the process of trying to write a story with the S1 version of Luna in it...

It isn't going all that well though.
The main problem is not only the huge, insurmountable writer's block that I have to deal with, but the lack of any consistent pacing. Everything seems rushed and forced... Not to mention very bland...

To say that my work is utter crap would be putting it nicely. Oh no, it isn't My Immortal bad, but it definitely isn't top caliber in comparison to some of the other stories on this site. Add to the fact that I can't follow up with additional chapters due to losing steam just in writing the first one, and you have a recipe for a rather shallow fanfic...

Needless to say, some much needed advise and assistance would be appreciated.
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Sadly, not only have I been doing very little reading lately, but "Sad" + "Dark" = "Not to my tastes" 99.9% of the time. Sorry, but good luck!
ForlanceAbice1 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Just one problem.
It hasn't gone into that territory yet.
At some point into the feature I am planning on it yes, but for now it will remain light hearted...
For the moment.
AgryX Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I'm loving this story. You have excellent style :D I can't wait to see what part Sweetie Belle plays.
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
I'm glad you liked it! Both chapters, judging by the dual faves. :D

How did you feel about Sweetie Belle's role?
AgryX Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Really well done. I liked that she has the ability to hear and notice the music of the night where no-one else could. Apple Bloom and Scootaloo were classic CMC's but Sweetie Belle's maturity I really liked.
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
It's been so long since I've re-read Nocturne that I have enough separation from it that I think I might have been a little TOO generous to Sweetie with her natural musical skill, especially knowing music theory type stuff... but there are lots of little nods to her childishness mixed in with her other maturity, like not being able to explain why she can't perform in front of others, or insisting she's going to be a fashionista, stuff like that.

In the end I think I agree that I did a decent job with that scene. Sweetie being my favorite filly bled through a little but she's still realistic-ish enough that I'm not too embarrassed. I'm glad you enjoyed!
AgryX Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I didn't think you were too generous. Sweetie Belle's musical talents aren't explored in the show much at all, she tends to ignore them. It's very likely that she has oodles of innate talent that she could utilise if only she released she had it.

Sweetie Belle was most definitely Sweetie Belle in your comic, your portrayal of her being the slightly shy and modest child she is while giving her the added depth of her musical knowledge came out really well imo.

I do believe your portrayal of Luna was 100% believable and excellently crafted as well :D
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
Well... um... Thank you? Thank you. :)
BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
Wow, I am so glad I took the time to read this. It's absolutely beautiful. Luna and music fit together like Rainbow Dash and speed. I'm looking forward to reading part 2.

After the forest symphony, I couldn't help but come up with the tagline: "Listen closely to the night. You may hear something you like." Even though this fanfic really doesn't need it.
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2011
I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. It had been a while since I had heard anything back about this story, and then in the space of one day I got two very positive responses and it made me feel gratified and reminded me of WHY I write: to inspire positive emotional responses in people.

Oh, and FYI, I really, really like that tagline. :D

I hope you liked part 2 as well, or have you not had a chance to read it yet?
BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
I will read it once I chop some other fanfics off my looooong list of bookmarks. And I'm sure I will enjoy it just as much, especially if music and night are still strong themes as they were here.

Glad you like the tagline! :)
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
Oh yes, night and music stick around through the entire story, that's for sure. Even if you have criticisms to give I hope you'll let me know what you think when you do get a chance to finish it up! Until then, take care~
Hidden by Commenter
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Haha, hot damn. Nothing like two artists in completely different fields heartily appreciating each others' work! I'm all smiles now, thanks! :D
LongshotLink Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Oh, and even though it's almost 2am for me, I'm going to go read it right now. That's how wonderful this story is.
DreadPirateMe Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Very touching...
AJTalon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Student Writer
This is fantastic! I love this take on Luna, being from a musical background myself. Very well done!
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
Thanks! Yeah, I don't know precisely where the musical Luna fanon struck me from, but I love it, too, even without a musical background.
AJTalon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Student Writer
Have you listened to any brony compositions for her? A number are really good.

Here are some links:



Also, thanks for the little Progress shoutout. That rascal Abacus just keeps popping up everywhere doesn't he?
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
Oh yeah, I rather enjoy a lot of the songs written in her name!

... Wait, where did I include a Progress shout out? 9_6
AJTalon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Student Writer
Might have been another fic, sorry. Thought you had included an abacus in this story. My bad.
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
No prob!
AJTalon Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Writer
Great. Now that I'm done with the last arc of Progress, what am I going to do now?
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Hand-stitch a Luna plush, buy Celestia socks from Target, and have a party!
(1 Reply)
AVeryStrange Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad I took the time to check your stuff out! I've seen a lot of fics where Luna has yet to regain her power, but none that focus so much on the pain that would bring her; usually it's just a sidelined factor to her depression, something taken for granted by the reader as a problem. she's dealing with. I think my favorite thing however is Luna as a musician. A lot of people (myself included) make her out as an artist because of her night skies, but you make her musical side seem like a natural and sensible part of her. I really like the idea of her being able to "hear" the moon. Anyway, on to the next part!
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011
I don't know where Luna as a musician got into my head, but I have noticed that while Derpy might be considered the "pony for the brony community" by many, Luna has for many become the "pony for the creative bronies." Be it painting the night sky, composing music, or interpretive dance (I may have made that one up), there's a lot of creative ponies who have used her as a form of surrogate almost.

And if you think about it, Twilight is a student, AJ is a manual laborer, Dash is an athlete, Pinkie is a cook and party planner, Fluttershy molests animals with love... Rarity is the only pony of the mane six who works or even seemingly dabbles in a creative field, and very, very few bronies connect with dress making or fashion design as an interesting field. It's no wonder that Lyra and Octavia are so popular: everypony is pining for more creative ponies to match up with the creativity in the community!
BoneSatellite Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
You forgot, Pinkie Pie is a cook, party planner, and songwriter.
CupcakesNom Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
I generally consider Pinkie Pie to be more of a... song improviser. Though she did mention that she's actively working on the song about Zecora. ... Eh, I dunno. >.>
AVeryStrange Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're right. We don't have any direct artist ponies, no painters or drawing ponies. I suppose that's why so many love Octavia as well. I hadn't really given much thought to it, but there is a distinct lack of artists. Rarity is kind of close, but I've never seen that emphasized, likely because, as you say, her particular style of creativity is not something a lot of people can connect with - even people who learn to sew probably don't know much about dressmaking by hand. I guess Luna isn't often made into a musician since we do have a couple of those, but she still fulfils a role as composer. Besides, Octavia can't be made to account for all of non-electronic music.
Add a Comment:

:iconcupcakesnom: More from CupcakesNom

Featured in Collections

Fics by Mst3kforever

passages_stamps by Ratchetgirlrules98

Fanfics by DuplexFields

More from DeviantArt


Submitted on
August 8, 2011
File Size
54.2 KB


3,069 (1 today)
27 (who?)


Creative Commons License
Some rights reserved. This work is licensed under a
Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 3.0 License.